Nicole Celestie

[Nikki]

Name: Nicole Celstie{Ce-Lest-e}
Age: 12
Gender: female
Type: Trainer
Position: n/a

Appearance:



Nicole is a tall red head. She always has her hair down long even though most of the time either her parents or her friends will yell at her to pull it up. Nicole has a golden eye color. She usually wears a warm, long sleeved shirt. Though the shirt usually doesn't cover her shoulders. Which defeats the purpose to keep warm.. Nicole is usually found wearing nice jeans. Somehow whenever they get dirty the dirt is mysteriously gone the next day..........)

Personality:
Nicole is bi-polar. Her moods change so quickly its kind of sad. Though Nicole is usually always an out going person. She can walk up to anyone and start a conversation. She is usually very hyper. She sometimes acts like she is on a sugar rush. Though sugar really doesn't affect her at all. Though she never usually states it she is very fond of writing and singing. She also doesn't like getting into fights very much.

However, when she is bored sometimes she will twirl her hair around her finger. It is because of this Nicole can be called weird every now and again.

History: Nicole grew up in a small little town in the
Ivy Region. She had always dreamed of going on her own Pokemon journey. She had debated between what she wanted to do though. She couldn't decide it was all so Exciting. As a breeder so could learn about all the different Pokemon of the world, as a coordinator she could show off the beauty of her Pokemon, and finally as a trainer she could catch Pokemon and travel all the gym's. Nicole just couldn't decide.

One day on Nicole's eleventh birthday, her mother had told her to go to the poke'shop in town. I did but on the way there I saw an actual capture, right before my eyes. The way the kid battled was amazing. The Pokemon didn't know what was coming. Nicole fell in love with being a trainer that day.

Nicole waited and waited for her twelveth birthday to come. She wanted to be a trainer so bad. Nicole wanted to go on the adventures and battle. But deep in Nicole's heart she really wanted to catch a Vulpix. She had seen the Pokemon before, and had just fallen in love. Nicole had even talked to one before. Though she would never tell her mother.

Nicole had finally begged her mom into submission. On the day after her twelveth birthday she set out to the lab. She hoped that the professor would give her her first Pokemon. Nicole was as happy as she could be. And maybe she would even meet a special Pokemon on the way.

Sample: (This is from another Pokemon Rp I have done. Hope it will do.)

A girl who had a sword at her back walked along the road to Nirven Lab. She couldn't really understand why she had to come here first. Of Course pokemon where important and she liked them but she wanted to be a cop not some random trainer who walked down some random path that someone told them to. She never really got the whole trainer thing. But for all of her life she had wanted to be a cop so it had never really crossed the girls mind before.

The girl's face was completely shadowed. She didn't have any facial expresion on it. Which didn't really help the MAKE A FRIEND, factor. It wasn't really Kira's fault. The girl had just been that way since she was a kid because of all the teasing she had recieved. It wasn't her fault that she was no good at carrying on a conversation eighter. So she tried her best whenever someone actually took the liberty of actually asking or even trying to talk to her. Though Kira didn't mind not talking eighter. She didn't mind silence. She actually enjoyed it sometimes. Well rather ALL the time since anyone rarely talked to her.

The girl stopped as the building that was the Nirven Lab came in her sites. Was this really it? The place was definitally small. But then again Kira always judged things. A personality flaw of hers. She just did it. It wasn't to be rude or anything of the sort for the girl wasn't the mean type. Just misunderstood. Kira sighed mentaly to herself and for a moment some expression came to her face. But soon enough it was gone again. The girl walked up slowly before tapping on the door. Her tails swished slightly good thing there was wind today.

[Xzavier]

Umm there were a lot of She, she, she's. It made everything sort of choppy. So on a point of improvement, I'd word on finding other ways of expressing what you're trying to say. Other than that, good profile. Accepted!!!

[Nikki]

It mostly she because I rp third person. So it is either she, her or Nicole. I just prefer she over her. which isn't really third person. xP sorry.

[Xzavier]

No big deal. Welcome along. Whenever you're ready you can go ahead and start an rp in the lab